Helium Hotspot - Network Token idea - feedback

I am working with the people at IoWe (Internet of We) which is a Helium Hotspot crypto mining project. We are interested in tokenizing the project and have come up with the below whitepaper… if anyone would like to review and provide any feedback from a more professional audit perspective that would be amazing.

If anyone is interested in learning more about Helium Hotspots and joining the network as well feel free to reach out